I haven’t posted in a while, but I have a good reason excuse. My latest story has been extremely difficult to write and post. In fact, I’ve tried writing it several times over the past few years and haven’t been able to gather up the nerve to finish it.

In order to finally get it out there, I promised myself that I wouldn’t post anything else to my story site, blog or forum until I at least finished the first chapter. Well, I finally put chapter one up and now I am allowing myself to post to my blog again.

There will be more chapters, including details of how the hairbrush was used by the three people who wielded it.

“Hairbrushes” is a story that epitomizes my ongoing struggle to write fiction that speaks truth. I’ve tried to put as much of my heart and soul into it as I can. In fact, this story is the emotional equivalent of full frontal nudity.

But, of course, as with all of my stories on StoriesOnLine, it’s fictional - even if it isn’t.

Many thanks to Jais Nereis for reading and commenting on an earlier version of chapter one. She encouraged me to put more of my emotional self into the story and I did. If the result still feels a bit flat or detached, it’s because I can’t bear to bare more of my soul - at least not right now.

I would love to hear any comments anyone has about this story - positive, negative, kind, cruel, compassionate, supportive, lecherous or even perverted.

If you’re willing to comment publicly, please do so here. I would love to have an open dialog on this or any of my stories - but this one in particular.

Hugs to all…